Driving becomes very important in Saudi Arabia in last a few years. Petrol is marginally comparative cheaper than petrol in New Zealand but the system of transport is not as good as the one in Auckland so many people travel by their privet cars. Despite the fact that my country does not have drinking and driving ,it has a big rate of car accident because people drive too fast and some young drivers are under the age of driving which is 17 at least so many citizens and foreign die as the result. Moreover, there are many traffic jams in the kingdom so it is believed that if the government let the women drive, they will increase the rate of the vehicles in the roads. What I like about driving in Saudi Arabia is that many expensive cars and sports cars are driven in street. Also, police officers, check points and CCTV (Saher) almost everywhere to make sure drivers are fallowing the rule of driving in the country. However, there are some place which dangerous to drive at because some young drivers are showing off their friends how are they good in driving by drafting or racing cars. The following website will give you an example for this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xu7PmZIxAY&feature=related
Osama and I are waiting for your comment Sami :) Caro
ReplyDeleteIt is so impressed that your writing involves a lot of expressions which we were taught in class. Well done, Osama!
ReplyDeletePatrick
Yep - he's doing well, aye? It's definitely getting better.
ReplyDeleteCaro
Hi Osama, despite the fact that ,you had many mistakes in your writing, there was obvious improvement.
ReplyDeleteIn the first sentence, you have written '' Driving becomes '' you should write '' Driving has become''(i'm not sure ask caro) . wrong spelling ''privet'' private. you need to be careful with plural words car accidents not car accident , just one!!!!!!
now I want to give the other students a chance to comment and find some thing.
by the way, we do not have china channel (CCTV) in Saudi Arabia :).
Have a good night.
Sami
Thanks guys for a lovely comments that mean a lot for me
ReplyDeleteSami I love Your second sentence :)
I know that
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